Kia ora. I am Corin from St Mary’s School. I really liked how you halved the slide and in one half you did the things that your allowed to share. And on the other half you did the things you shouldn’t share. I learnt that you shouldn’t share the person you admire. Maybe next time you could make the writing a little bit bigger because I couldn’t really see the writing that good. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora. I am Corin from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you halved the slide and in one half you did the things that your allowed to share. And on the other half you did the things you shouldn’t share.
I learnt that you shouldn’t share the person you admire.
Maybe next time you could make the writing a little bit bigger because I couldn’t really see the writing that good.
Please visit my blog
here
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Corin